Thursday, May 11, 2017

Autumn writing


It’s autumn you can see the leaves fluttering and buttering all across the ground . It’s also likely you sleep merely at night or you will eventually get the flew. When i walk across the road to my house feels like heaven  but just a bit leafy. Instead of the breeze flowing across my face it's the leaves assembling into  a tornado to block my way. Also when the farmers shoot there air gun it's not the birds that fly its the leaves that flow. The leaves are so colourful that it's like a rainbow every day. For me its heaven but for them its there every day route.Autum Leaves | wsilver | Flickr

2 comments:

  1. Wow amanjot I love your autumn story
    you have really hooked me in when you said "Instead of the breeze flowing across my face it's the leaves assembling into a tornado to block my way."
    Well done

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  2. This is fantastic writing Amanjot!!!!!! I look forward to your winter writing :) You use some great vocabulary and description.

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